真没想到(英语作文)英语作文 my dream

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上面是向trained挺进为初中的小学生们重新整理的冲关2023中考之近几年中考英文最高分题目,以附注。

考题回顾

假定你是王华,你的澳大利亚好友Terry将去中国闲谈开讲,发送信息向你询问有关习俗。请你回复电子邮件,文本包括:

1. 抵达天数;

2. 最合适的礼品;

3. 餐桌上礼仪。

特别注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 能适度增加细节,以使措词相联。

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【思路指点】

本文是一篇电子邮件类石蜊写作。餐桌上礼仪也是学生比较熟悉的热门话题。Seiches时特别注意几点:

一、文本关键点要齐全:

1.抵达天数;2.最合适的礼品;3.餐桌上礼仪。

二、分词:

主要用通常那时时和将来时;

三、别名:

第二、三别名。

四、特别注意采用正确的高级词语、词组或字词,以提高题目的水平;

五、适度采用许多疑问句和Collected,使文章抒发自然、简洁。

1. 下载信息关键点。

2. 三个任务点,第二段文本:致谢旁人,马上呈现旁人所涉及的热门话题,造访中国家庭成员,开讲天数的要求和失礼! 第二段文本:开讲造访的最合适礼品,能适度伸展,首度造访,亲密无间好友之间造访,二次造访,家庭成员情况适合的礼品,通用的礼品等。第二段:table manners,能叙述三四个通常的中国人的餐桌上礼仪和失礼的地方,有鲜明民族特色之处,最后一句抒发预祝。

3. 分词,给旁人的建议和说明,用通常那时时,叙述风俗礼仪这是客观规律的东西,用通常那时时。

4. 头脑风暴词组、字词结构,开始这就是说。

5. 措词。

6. 检查拼法和句法。

【最高分题目】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.

Firstly, I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.

If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

【片断积累】

开讲礼仪:

1. 事先签订合同一个天数以便旁人事先做好安排。假如事先已经签订合同好了天数,就应遵守签订合同,准时抵达,如需提前五分钟五分钟之内能接受,千万别身心俱疲,以防女主人等候,也千万别太早到,以防女主人未做好准备。这是一个基本礼仪问题。

2.假如有专用地域文化民族特色的礼品是最好的。假如闲谈有晚辈,带点专卖局和茶叶或许多老人家用的保健品等;假如闲谈有小孩,带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶,然后加点茶叶啥的;千万别送钟、梨、伞等这些东西,被认为不吉祥。

3.女主人会请客人入座上席,再请晚辈入座客人旁。入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入。在中餐结束时,筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上,并应等客人们都放下筷子以后,女主人示意离席后方能离开,不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走,这样做是很没礼貌的表现。

常用词语和句子

准时:on time/punctually

餐桌上礼仪:table manners

最合适的、正确的:appropriate

造访:pay a visit to

You are supposed/expected/required to do…

It s a good idea to…

It s appropriate/suitable to do …

It s sensible/reasonable/advisable to do …

It s good manners to do …

It s noteworthy that…

I think it would be more helpful if you could do…

It would be wise of you to…

It s desirable to do …

It s inappropriate to do …

It s impolite to do…

It s unwise/inadvisable to do …

Never (助动词/系动词/情态动词)主语+谓语动词…

It s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.

考题回顾

你受小学生会委托为校宣传栏“英文天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,文本包括:

1. 短片文本:学校的发展;

2. 放映天数、地点;

3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

特别注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 能适度增加细节,以使措词相联。

【写作指点】

英文书面通知的分词应该以通常将来时为主,多采用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的采用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。

第二个特别注意点:层次一定要清晰,一个层次要抒发一件事情,使人看起来一目了然。

【最高分范文】

Notice

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

The Student Union

考题回顾

假定你是王华,你的英国好友Peter 来信询问你校小学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,文本包括:

1. 学校的体育场馆;

2. 主要的运动项目;

3. 你喜欢的项目。

特别注意:

1. 词数100左右:

2. 能适度增加细节,以使措词相联。

【思路指点】

本题题目为提纲式题目,形式依然是书信,即给英国好友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活热门话题。这一热门话题贴合小学生生活的实际,小学生并不陌生,有话可说。

首先能介绍学校的体育场馆,场馆的位置,大小,开放天数等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些,可挑选一到两个做详细介绍,如小学生的活动天数,活动形式,以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么,并简单分析喜欢的原因,自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用通常那时分词,第一别名的方式来写。

【最高分范文】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

考题回顾

第一节 石蜊写作

假定你是王华,你校英文协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中小学生。请你写信应聘,文本包括:

1. 口语能力:

2. 相关经验;

3. 应聘目的。

特别注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 能适度增加细节,以使措词相联。

【思路指点】

本篇书面抒发属于石蜊,要求写应聘信。

第一步:根据提示可知,学校英文协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中小学生。要求写封应聘信,文本包括:1.口语能力:2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。

第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组)。

第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,特别注意主谓一致和分词问题。

第四步:连句Seiches,特别注意采用正确的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文文本完整,语言规范,语篇相联,词数适度。另外全文中没有中国式英文的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英文的能力。

【范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whats more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

I m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

考题回顾

第二节 读后续写(最高分25分)

阅读上面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!" “OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

特别注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少采用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所采用的关键词语。

【思路指点】

读后续写要求学生首先要读懂已有信息,不仅能读懂字面含义,还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时,学生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上,学生要顺着文章的思路,根据线索,发挥想象,对其后的情节进行合理预测,并用语言抒发出来。

通过阅读所给文章可知,父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个闲谈体验农场生活,见父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验。

根据第二段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开,能写马的反应,也能写人的反应,但要特别注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——千万别误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写。

续写时特别注意要采用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,正确的时候加以运用。最后还要特别注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后要用下划线标出你所采用的关键词语。

【最高分范文】

Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!

考题回顾

假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国好友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将与7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

(1)比赛的天数、地点;

(2)邀请他的原因;

(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。

特别注意:

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可适度加入细节,使文本充实、措词相联;

(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词语:

世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【思路指点】

本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要特别注意几点:

一、动笔前,一定要认真分析关键点,理解关键点要抒发的含义,不能遗漏关键点,跑题偏题。文本关键点包括:

1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请;

2. 介绍比赛的天数、地点等安排;

3. 说明邀请他的原因,包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖;

4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。

二、写作时特别注意准确运用分词,对于本文来说,以通常将来时为主,上下文意思相联,符合逻辑关系,尽量采用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要特别注意采用高级词语和高级字词使文章显得更有档次。

【文本关键点】

1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请;

2. 介绍比赛的天数、地点等安排;

3. 说明邀请他的原因,包括Chris 曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖;

4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。

【最高分范文】

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.

With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.

I m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

考题回顾

第一节(15分)

假设你是红星中学高三小学生王华,你的英国好友Jim在给你的电子邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回电子邮件,文本包括:

1. 表示欢迎;

2. 推荐他上哪所大学;

3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

特别注意:1. 词数不少于50;

2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Yours,

Li Hua

【思路指点】

本文为提纲式题目,文章要求写推荐信,为英国好友介绍北京的大学。首先能介绍一下写作背景(Jim对中国文化感兴趣,要来中国学习),抒发欢迎。然后推荐一所大学,并简要介绍推荐的原因(如大学的民族特色,能学到什么等)。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备,如能提前学习汉语,读点有关中国传统文化的书,了解中国的习俗,让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用通常那时时,别名能采用第二别名。

【最高分范文】

Dear Jim,

I m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is, perfect for you where you. can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

考题回顾

第二节(20分)

假设你是红星中学高三小学生王华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国小学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的过程。

特别注意:词数不少于60。

【思路指点】

本文为图片介绍类题目,这类题目是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛,能是记叙文、说明文,也能是议论文。按照本文的要求可知,是写一篇记叙文。

1. 认真读图,把握中心。

根据提示可知,文本是带领外国小学生体验中国茶文化的全过程,介绍了茶具,泡茶,沏茶,品茶的过程,所以这是这组图画所要抒发的中心。

2.初步构思,考虑用词、词组、字词和分词。

在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑采用正确的词语、词组和字词,以充分地抒发文章的文本。本文是讲述上周发生的事情,故分词要以过去时为主,别名是第一别名,尽可能地充分利用所学的词组或字词来表述具体的文本。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。

3. 连词成句,然后再连句Seiches。

运用适度的单词或词组正确抒发各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时,要特别注意采用适度的疑问句语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

4.反复审核,修改错误。

一篇文章写好后,应进行检查,看短文中是否有错,如拼法、用词、分词、语态及抒发方面的错误。5.宜详则详,该略则略。对于许多细节方面的文本,假如是文章必不可少的,在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。假如是可有可无的细节,则可视具体情况进行增删。据此,我们在读图时一定要特别注意阅读各图中的许多细节文本,看其是否影响文章的文本。

【最高分范文】

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.

In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.

Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.

At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.

【亮点说明】

巧妙采用定语从句,提升了文章档次:

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

采用非谓语动词,使句子抒发更简洁:

On arriving at the tea house…

I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,

Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture

holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.

采用倒装句突出重点。

Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.

采用it做形式主语,使抒发更地道。

It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.

考题回顾

书面抒发(最高分25分)

请阅读上面文字,并按照要求用英文写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作文本】

1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象;

2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2.题目中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不必写标题

【评分标准】

文本完整,语言规范,语篇相联,词数适度。

【思路指点】

先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的热门话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分析,表明态度,作出价值判断。

文章首段要简要介绍两段材料,第二段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭,看了on-line rating,结果饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。

然后写你对online rating的看法,表明观点,特别注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。

文章属于议论文,要特别注意主题句的采用,论点之间要特别注意有条理。文章可主要采用通常那时时,第三别名来写。

【最高分范文】

Possible version one:

As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

Possible version two:

Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay

for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

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