#你都帮李华干过些什么#

六八 2024年06月14日 15:08 65 0

假如你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点： 1. 做

I’m an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I would see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 试题分析：考查提纲类作文写作，重点考查考生的书面表达的能力。做家务的话题应该是中学生熟悉，有话可写的素材，因此难度并不大。题目以周记的形式展现，要求考生先介绍做家务的理由，再介绍做家务的过程，最后写出自己的感受。考生在写作时，一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作，三个要点都十分重要，如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上，抓住语言的准确性，再写出几个亮点词汇和句式，得到高分应该比较轻松。【亮点说明】Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.这句话是现在分词做状语， Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? 这句话用了同位语从句， I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 这句话里面用了词组：put sth in place把…布置得井井有条， Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 这句话用了倒装句，还有文章用了Firstly， After that这样的词使文章更加连贯。